Ransom! Chapter 10
TEN In his office in town, where he would not be disturbed by household activities, Jarrod sat at his desk, his pen poised over Nick’s half-written obituary, silently contemplating the words that...
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The man you brought to me stood five foot ten inches tall; four inches shorter than you describe your brother.”Yessss!!! A ray of hope for the Barkleys. The grief is ending and the mystery is...
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A clue from the mortician...excellent! Who needs fancy DNA testing when the clothes don't fit? This is very good plotting. I look forward to seeing where you lead us.
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Way to go, Mr. Beckett! And now it's time for Doc Merar to step forward, CSI Stockton-style.
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What a relief to put the grief away in favor of hope. It's sad to keep the rest of the family out of the loop, however. Let's hope Doc Merar can give some answers, and that the watcher in town is not...
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Way to go Breckett! Now, for them to get answers and avoid tipping off whoever is watching!
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At last Heath has remembered something very important and Jarrod's instincts are kicking in and when Dr. Merar examines the body they should have the proof they need..but how is Nick faring and how...
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I really enjoyed reading this chapter, from Jarrod’s misery to his realization that the body might not be that of Nick. A superb bit of plotting. “Not according to Beckett. I wish there was something,...
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I wasn't expecting the revelation that the body is not Nick to be made that way. Very clever. Now how are they going to find him?
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YES! The cat is sneaking out of the bag... I'm glad Jarrod and Heath are beginning to realize there's hope Nick is alive. The mystery man in town worries me though. Stay sharp, boys!
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Thank goodness the cloud of grief is being lifted! I really liked the way you used the suit to bring up the mistake in the body id! Eagerly looking forward to more of this story!
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